Freedom Writing Review

My writing goals for Term 2, 2019 are:

Vary my sentence beginnings, structures, and lengths that are grammatically correct.

Organize my writing into paragraphs

Freedom Writing Drafts

Begin each new piece of writing at the top of this doc (under this box) so we can see the most recent at the top. Add the date and a title for your piece of writing. Copy and paste your writing goals to the top of this page. Ask your Writing Buddy to check your writing, they may even be able to add some feedback.

Review Template

Title:    The Thames mountain bike track.

Description:   I am going to reconsider the Thames bike track that I did in the holidays.

Rating:           ⭐⭐⭐⭐ I rated it 4 out of 5 stars because I reckon it wasn’t long enough.

What I liked and why: I liked the downhills and the jumps at the start. I liked it because I like going downhill really fast and I like jumping jumps, and getting lots of air. I like how it had some sharp veers to go around. I liked that at the start of the track there are two little bike tracks that you could warm up on. You could function your turns and jumps. It’s like a pump track.

What I disliked and why: The subjects I despised about it was that it wasn’t long enough and I reckon they should add more jumps into it when you are going down. I didn’t like at the carpark to get up to the start of the track you have to climb a big hill on your bike. I think that they should let you drive up to the start of the track and make the track so that it ends up back where you placed your car.

Who else might enjoy this: Anyone that likes mountain biking, doing jumps, going throughout sharp corners, and going fast.